A draft …

Just phaffing about with some words … they aren’t right but I want an opinion … or two …

love
ignited by a smile or
a word,
an act of kindness or
a recognition of a like soul,
words fill minds
smiles grow broad
then love
hides away
it sits
watching
listening
seeking
thinking
it may stay that way for a length of time
it may appear in a hug
it may just sit and be
it may sit buried
appearing when help is needed or
an ear or
an escape.

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1 Response to A draft …

  1. Inger :-) Queen of Quotes says:

    WOW… this is good Sus… I really like it, but then I’m no poet and you know it! Q of Q 🙂

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